Need feedback please

Hello! I know I am not around much anymore but I am still out there trying to improve, when I feel passionate about something I always come back here to perfect it. This is one of those instances so if @Crazy Potato or anyone can give me feedback, I would appreciate it.
This Image is based off recent emotional changes in my life and this song


Honestly, I feel the text placement is off, but I cant figure out how...perhaps I should use all the same font except the last line, or maybe cut one entirely

 

If you could, applying a similar effect to the text that you did to the image might not be something bad to try. (the repeated blur out) If you want to keep the placement of the text spread out. Might look weird but depending on what you do with it, could turn out nice.

The first font (top left) looks like a good choice for the theme of the image.
As for placement, if you go with just the first font a small consolidated area for the text might be worth looking at. So it's like a small soliloquy. This gives the impression of personal development going with a psychological and somewhat dark but thought provoking image.

Just my two cents.

 

alright, I decided to move everything together I do kind of like the final line being different, but if you still feel it should be changed, I might change it as well




Also, your sig, is one of my favorite lines in that entire show
"Two types of girls in this world..."

 

Don't forget it's your image and will you have to consistently look at it, so whatever makes you happy with it xD

I think there needs to be some sort of link between the 'not crushed' and rest of the text. I'm not quite sure how you want to go about doing this. It feels like the 'not crushed' is just an after thought or the awkward red-headed stepchild. Might just be me though haha. My eyes just trail from top left to bottom right and the focus of the image interrupts the flow of the text for me.

Haha, yeah it's one of my favorites too. You gotta love her!

 

Well, its a quote from another song of hers. But do you think I should just do away with with that last text?

 

I like the feel of the phrase 'I am crusher, not crushed', as it puts emphasis on the speaker overcoming their adversity. Feels like a sense of empowerment.

I would play around with text placement and see if anything jumps out at you.

 

Honestly the font I wanted either A broke GIMP or B cost like $20

I also REALLY liked the idea of "no turning back" being all by itself I also used your idea to zoom blur the text, I feel this is a bit high so I might turn it down a few notches

 

Actually, I hate the blur, HAHA I tried a doubleup instead, looks intersting I am gona save it and head to work and think on it a bit more. before I show it off anything additional or ideas ill see when i get home tonight

Much appreciated

 

You're welcome ^.^ it looks like it's coming together and taking a good shape.

 

Well, I think she liked it xD i spent a lot of time on that image, but its THIS image that she made her Twitter header xD

Less work = More fame (I "made" both images)

 

And then this happened on Facebook chat

https://twitter.com/CCrusherP/status/569695464892829697