Me!Me!Me!

First sig in over 3 years but think I've done ok a bit rusty
on some things but i like how it turned out cnc please

 

It's alright but the black text was a bad choice as Me Me Me has huge amounts of colors. The lines are distracting me from the render so if you removed them I'm 99% sure this will be amazing. All in all just change the typeface to a more colorful one and remove the lines then this signature will be great!
Looking forward to seeing more.

 

Thanks for the advice I'll give t a shot

 

Here's V2 I didn't want to get rid of the lines completely because it left it with little flow so i blurred them a bit and had them blend in with the render a bit to draw less focus on them. I also just made the text a simple outline think it works better.

 

Here is my go at it, I've uploaded my psd to teach you a few tricks! Whatever you learn from this show me in your next post
http://download1513.mediafire.com/hn7v9t11imog/joqhrf657o19xcc/Me+Me+Me.psd​

 

that's really good i like how it simple and just flows really well thank