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Sir Maddy's Choose Your Own Adventure

Discussion in 'The Asylum' started by Sir-Maddy, Apr 28, 2013.

  1. Sir-Maddy Finger Lickin' Good™

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    i believe the previous favorite was some yuri twister fun so i'm gonna go with that
     
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    Yuri twista!

    as for the title...I have a feeling the word "yuri" should be in it xD
     
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    Guess I'll join in with the twister (though baths are better).
     
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    I already said what my options were back on the old site so really no point in repeating em. (Beside couldn't decided on just one)

    @Maddy: About the name of the story. I know it probably isn't what you wanted to hear but I do like the name it already has. Sir Maddy's Choose Your Own Adventure. That just sounds right to me and if you ever made this a game then it would be even more perfect. I dunno it's your call really but I 2nd the title having Yuri in it if the name must be changed. Also if it must be changed then I say it should be about what the story is about, something that does justice to the characters esp the main character and how she so selflessly goes out of her way to protect others.
     
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    Okay guys I'll update tomorrow.
     
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    Title Of The Story: Lonely Yuri I mean, Lovely Yuri.
     
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    Seems we all wanted twister.

    The Story: Twister won (I forgot which option it was)

    "How about we play twister, it's a game I haven't played in a while?" you ask the two girls.
    "Sure, that sounds great!" Ayumu and Yuki reply.
    You go to your cupboards and open them up.
    You rummage through all the crap that's been stored in here for years and finally find the box under a pile of garbage, you really should clean it up when you have the chance.
    You put it under your arm and close the door.
    You return to where Yuki and Ayumu are, they are sitting on the couch.
    You place it on the table.
    "So, we'll have two people playing at the same time while the third person spins the wheel, sound fair?" you propose.
    They both nod.
    "Okay you two will play first." you declare.
    You set up the twister mat and take out the wheel.
    You wave your hand to signal both Yuki and Ayumu to come over here and start.
    When they get into position on the mat, you spin the wheel.
    "Let us begin." you say.

    "Right foot, green." you say.
    They both put their right foot on a green circle.
    As time goes on their positions get more revealing.
    Seeing Yuki with her butt high up sends through your head.
    However you are interrupted by the sound of Ayumu collapsing, meaning the game is over and Twister has finished.
    Yuki than falls on top of Ayumu and they kiss.
    You are flabbergasted by this and decide Twister has officially ended.

    What will you do now?
    A) Have a bath
    B) Play Truth or Dare
    C) Have dinner
     
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    You know I want to join this now but I'm way too far behind.// maybe at some point I'll try and catch up. Or maybe someone could give me a summary and I'll just read up later?
     
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    Dont know if we're doing the votes here or on refugee but i vote C. probably just because i'm hungry but whatever and meta maddy linked the story so far in the first post if u wanted to read up
     
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    You know I want to join this now but I’m way too far behind.// maybe at some point I’ll try and catch up. Or maybe someone could give me a summary and I’ll just read up later?


    Basically, you're in the role of a 15 year old depressed lesbian girl.
    Until one day you meet a girl standing in the rain.
    From there on you encounter various girls and become the person to solve their problems, while also learning how to care for other people.

    Sounds pretty cliché I know, but I have provided a link which has the full story on it.
     
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    Option C
    Then bath time
     
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    Option C
    Then bath time


    This. ^.^
     
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    Bath scene! There is not other option >.>
     
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    Bath scene! There is not other option >.>

    This^
     
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    Sorry guys.
    But I'm going to have to put this story on temporary hiatus.
    I've run out of ideas, so I'll resume it once I get some story ideas.
     
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    Should add explosions and armies.
     
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    Sir Maddy wrote:
    Sorry guys.
    But I’m going to have to put this story on temporary hiatus.
    I’ve run out of ideas, so I’ll resume it once I get some story ideas.

    The wait will be worth it. The story suffers when you force it and benefits when you don't force it. That's what I believe when it comes to telling a story anyway so the hiatus is fine by me and best of luck. Also, that was a perfect telling of what the story is about Maddy and it's not cliché imo. :) I like it and so does everyone else or we wouldn't be here reading it. ^-^
     
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    @sir-maddy
    Any ETA of chapter 2?
     
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    Just add cat girls. Cat girls never fail.
     

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