Last Person to Post Wins

Critique my drawing?
Added a new pic to my depository, so I was wondering if any comments could be made.

 

didnt notice that. lemme see

 

This new "Gillian" rank is kinda creepy. Something is starting to appear.

 

^ winner

 

im lost

 

Think I got a compass around here somewhere. Maybe that'll help

 

Mine is pointing at North. Why on earth did that guy end up with that name?

 

north eh? i wonder too. we have hilaga for that direction. i wonder how that person thought of that word.

 

Hey guys whats been going on, are we lost again?

 

when were we not lost?

 

Lost track. Time to get a new one.

 

Thought I was found once, but it turned out they where looking for someone else

 

ouch!
cant help but think of the miss U fiasco.

 

Hey anyone want a mush-mellow?
*takes out a bag*

 

im full for the time being. thanks for the offer doe.

 

*starts lighting a camp fire*
Its safe to have them roasted right?
*looks around at surrounding*

 

*surrounding looks back at him

Provided you do not turn them into marshmallow torches.

 

sweet, whos up for a roasted mallow?

 

I'll bring the grams & chocolate bars!

 

*in GLaDOS voice*
ill bring the cake