Concept Villain Artwork

So i was told this would be a good place to put this but if not i'll delete and put it in off topic. Basically i'm working on a doujinshi and this is the concept art of the main villain Limbano. Here's a link to the full details on the situation i was in and why i was unsure if this was the right place to post it: http://dubtopia.eu/forum/index.php?threads/im-a-little-confused.4969/#post-65764

 

thanks

 

You've got very good body perception in your drawing!! Glad you posted this!!

 

Thanks but to be honest i used a reference when drawing this so if i didn't use a reference from the neck down the drawing would look horrible which is why i can't start the doujinshi until i get a job and buy some artist manikins

 

Not sure if you meant to do this or if it is due to the quality of the scan, but why does one of the eyes have bounded slit eyes while the other has unbounded. One (the right which is on the left side of the picture) has a circle the other doesn't have.
Other than that looks pretty good, though I always find the eye thing a little cliche.

 

it was the quality of the picture i took it with my phone, scanner wasnt working. both of them are bound although the one on the left is better quality, you have to remember though this is just a concept drawing meaning changes will be made to the character.

 

Well of course, just making sure.