WARNING! R18! Yuri Gods Be Praised!

(Not my best work. But just a brief few paragraphs, a taste of an Idea I've been thinking about. Always wanted to write a erotic romance story about two girls. Well enjoy, maybe my spark of creativity will actually hit me next time.)

"Shut up! You don't know anything! You don't know what its like to be like this! You can stand! Walk! Fucking run! What can I do? Lie here hoping someone will come and visit me, hope they bother to remember me..."
Tears were trailing down her cheeks, her fringe draped over her eyes as her head dropped. Fists clenched and anger surging through what remained of her body.
"I'm broken like this.. Useless..." Her words left her lips like the last spit of energy she could spare. The sudden outburst of anger vanished as quickly as it had come. Though not because she was over it, but instead because she had lost the will to care.
"You are right." Claire replied. "I don't know what that is like. I can stand, walk and run. Admittedly I can't dance any better than you can, but that doesn't really matter." She forced a smile on, like she always did. Though this time it wasn't her usual confident smirk. But a barely maintained grin behind wavering eyes. Her hands shook as she rested them on her lap, which she quickly tried to hide by clutching them together.
"I'm not like you. I know. Hell, I'm not like most people. All I meant was I know what its like to be different... To be alone-" Claire leaned back a outstretched hand flew past her face. Luna toppled over the edge of the bed, barely able to pull herself back before glaring at Claire, her eyes till cursed red by her tears.
"Don't say it! Shut up! I'm not alone! I am never alone! Shut up! You don't know anything! Just leave me! GO!" Her voice was beginning to break, croaking as it suffered the price of lack of use. Claire had not seen her quite like this before. All the anger, all the frustration. Boiling over finally. She kept telling herself this was a good thing, that she needed to let it out. But she couldn't help feel her heart tighten as her words pierced deeper.
"I won't... I'm not going to leave you!" She cried, crimson tears begun to flow down her cheeks.
"Yes, you will! Eventually you'll get bored of me, start to hate me... You only stayed around so long because I was an easy meal-" For the first time ever, Claire hit Luna.

The blow was not gentle either, it drew blood. A fine cut across Luna's top lip, a small but noticeable amount of blood began to trail down her chin as she sat clutching her face, silent. Luna refused to look at Claire, a mix of dripping blood and tears began to pool on the edge of her mattress. A hand gripped her shoulder tightly, pulling her to sit up right as Claire sat herself beside her. Luna glanced up briefly to look at Claire, only to meet their lips in a forced kiss. Luna sat their shocked, Claire's lips were pressing against hers with her hands gripping either side of her shoulders firmly. After a few seconds she tried to resist, pushing Claire back with whatever strength she could muster. But it was futile, Claire was far stronger than her. Far stronger than most men even. Claire amped up the intensity by slipping her tongue between her lips, licking at the cut and trailing back and fourth against Luna's soft lips. Luna's hands pressed firmly against Claire's chest, still trying to push her off. But her strength wavered quickly and she let her hands fall lifeless against the mattress. Luna widen her mouth slightly, letting Claire slide in like a hungry snake. Their tongues met inside, Claire's took the lead and wrapped around Luna's. Her grip on her shoulders loosen and she pushed her down against the bed, lying her down as she shifted her body half way on top of Luna. Their bodies pressed against one another, their warmth combining and increasing as their hands began to trail across one another's bodies. Luna could fell her anger subsiding, but something else just has fiery was taking its place. Claire pulled away, hanging over Luna with a mix of lust and sorrow on her expression.
"I hate you..." Luna whispered, before wrapping her arms around her and pulling her back in.

Claire took initiative, her hand gently exploring Luna's pajamas with her fingers. A button undo here, a button undo there. She helped up so she could remove the rest of her top, dropping it to the bedroom floor. While Luna sat their bare, hanging off Claire by her shoulders. Claire moved in close, sniffing at Luna's bare neck and chest. She still smelt of last nights sweat, yet to bathe. Claire loved it, she could stay there with Luna in her arms and her face resting on her exposed chest. Every breath comforted her, that familiar scent, one of safety and love. She gently laid Luna back down against the bed, her lips striking her exposed neck. Immediately Luna cried out, a soft moan as the sensitive skin sent a shiver down her spine. Claire kissed and sucked at her neck, baring her teeth ever so. Brushing them against her skin. Her fangs poked against Luna's neck, the very thought of them piercing her skin sent a mix of terror and desire throughout her body. She leaned her face the over way, further exposing her neck, welcoming Claire to her. But the bite didn't come. "Not yet..." Claire whispered, a slight giggle on her voice as she began to kiss down from Luna's neck and towards her chest. Every kiss was like a stepping stone, setting off a flurry of tickle and pleasure all in one. Luna's hands gripped Claire's shirt tightly as she got closer and closer to her breasts, the cool air of Claire's breath flowed against her exposed nipples. Claire trailed her lips against Luna as she slid them up to the peak of her breast, her tongue circling around the base before she engulfed the whole. Luna moaned, her back slightly arching. "Don't!" She cried, though Claire wasn't about to listen.

Claire's mouth licking and gently nipping at Luna's breast. But her hand found a new crusade to take, tracing down from her belly towards her thighs, protected only by a thin pair of blue stripped panties. Her fingers brushed against them firmly, Luna gasped and grabbed Claire's forearm. "You can't! What if-" Another moan cut her off, Claire's fingers were beginning to press and rub against her tip. It didn't take long for a moist patch to begin to form. Luna's cheeks flushed red as she felt herself heat up, her body burned and she could only think of what was to happen next. Her excitement was growing, alarmingly. All her anger had faded, now she wanted something else. Something just as alluring. TBC

 

Well this didn't leave much room for imagination. Definitely saw the selling point.
Here is my response.
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Vampires, sex and cripples. Sounds like a popular American TV show if I ever heard one.
Been suffering from that writers block, so I'm trying to break it by forcing some words out.
Hopefully I can think of something more inspiring soon.

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5/7 will continue reading.

only comment is conversation/talking lines should be separated from the narrative lines. it helps reduce confusion on what is going on and who is talking. describing narratives for the talking line is alright to be in the same line.

ex.

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narrative lines here. narrative lines there

"I am not like that!", said girl.
"But I thought its ok?", replied other person.
"No! Its not ok. I dont like to be thought of things of such sort."

another narrative line starts here.
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The Asylum is for random things like this. If you want to do more writing like this, you could always post in the RP Club section (which doubles as the Creative Writing Club) and tag people that seem interested.
But then again, the R18 part may not allow it.
https://justanimeforum.net/social-forums/rp-club.14/

 

I very much appreciate the advice. I've been trying to read more to get an idea on how to write and how to structure sentences and use grammar. I'm quite terrible at it lol. Though I will admit I usually put more effort in than this, I didn't proof read any of it, so there is probably tones of mistakes.

 

The Asylum seemed to be the most appropriate place for this sort of thing. I assumed it would get taken down if I put R18 in the title and they didn't like that kind of stuff. Usually they just don't like nude images or videos. This isn't a roleplay, just a brief bit of creative writing. Thanks for the suggestion though

 

you and me both. as a native non-english speaker, i have troubles of what preposition to use for certain situations. dont even mention the s-v agreements. that one i mostly get things wrong there. as a start, i dont even know if this paragraph alone has mistakes. xD